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This is my introduction for an essay on the following topic Did the period of reconstruction after the Civil War leave positive or negative legacy for the African Americans? After the great Civil War ended, the Union was saved but the nation was shattered. The period of reconstruction to rebuild the nation had started. The salves were now officially free but what they would do with this newfound freedom would leave a legacy. Some were positive and successful but there was also failures and negative aspects the African Americans left after Reconstruction. what alterations should I make to make my introduction better. I also want to make it a bit longer because my teacher said that paragraphs should be at least 5-7 sentences long. What should I do. Is what I already have good? ( I’m in 8th grade so make your judgment on that level) thanks

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